Hey there,
just wanted to say that i really like the changes you made from Beta to the Final Version of this chapter. I am not writing that much but i read trough the Beta Sector pretty much so..i was kinda interested if you really put the changes community metioned into your Final Version.
Well..you did. And i think this fits just great. Everybody who played and finished the Beta knows what i mean and i as a player and a follower of your work (art) want to say thank you.